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Edited on 18/08/2016 at 20:01

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Hello everyone!

Taking into consideration Neil's advice we want to start a new conversation in which you can express yourself through writing. If you want it to be a short story, poem, tale, song, even a whole novel.... Anything that helps you channel all you need to say and that in normal words you can't. 

So I leave you this space and feel free to use it as you wish and ask our writing expert @Bipolarbill for advice.

All the best,

Gilda 

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24/07/2015 at 14:45

Sounds good, although not the most salacious chap


Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-07-24 14:45:34
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Edited on 25/08/2015 at 11:29

Perfectly dead

8 October 2012 at 04:05
 
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Pretty little doll all penciled in,thieves stole her smile

Mother's talk on corners, children pleading at the knee

There's something wrong with her they say

Then move on with their day with not a sound

Standing on the edge ready to fall

Screaming in the darkness,no help ever came

He opened her like a book ,taking his fill

Devouring all that was beautiful inside her

For year's she cried for the daemon to die

Yet the wolf came back hungrier then before

The book closes but the nightmare's remain

She's just an empty vase painted for no reason of her own

The flower once pure now dead and blackened on the floor

 


Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-07-30 20:19:20

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31/07/2015 at 17:13

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Wow @katrinaj87 this is so intense! I like it a lot and it makes me sad at the same time. It is really well written and you can totaly feel all the pain and connect, you tell a whole story just in few lines.

Thanks a lot for sharing this with the rest. If you want to share more please keep doing it! 

All the best,

Gilda 

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Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-07-31 17:13:21
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Edited on 25/08/2015 at 11:28

Rag Doll

 

Sad little princess all torn and broken

All she wanted was to see the stars

Help is what she needed,a prison's what she found

Slave to the pound, children in chain's

The poster's on the wall.....starving little runaway

Demons in pursuit,clawing at the dark

Year's have passed not much has changed

New life,new demon’s it's all the same

 


Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-07-31 19:53:08
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Edited on 25/08/2015 at 11:28

Curtain Call

Standing there alone waiting for the show to begin,her palms sweaty her heart pounding. Acting has become just another daily chore,mundane and repetitive. Her jaw aches with the stain of a thousand empty lies, her smile just another painting on her useless lips. The curtains open,the crowd stares ,again, waiting for another dumb act so they have an excuse to laugh. She wishes for the night, when she is alone smile gone,music up,tears running unchecked down her cheek. She sips away at another ounce of poison ,Novocaine  for the soul. she laughs,she dances,she smiles. There's so much noise, so loud saying everything,but nothing all just adding to numb the deadening power of the human condition.


Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-07-31 19:54:57
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02/08/2015 at 10:28

Victim Mentality

 

Oh dear oh dear 

Life is full of woe !  There's so much wrong

with the world and so

I myself , don't have to be

Though  


Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-08-02 10:28:56
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04/08/2015 at 15:16

My heart stops every time I think of all the time we've spent together, always telling me what to do and ruining every opportunity of happiness. You are the master of my emotions and my happiness, you the one that tells me I'm fat every time I see myself on the mirror, you who thinks that I am never enough... You are killing me softly, but I won’t let you.


Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-08-04 15:16:33
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04/08/2015 at 17:30

Is this Zen ?


Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-08-04 17:30:41
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11/08/2015 at 16:33

Another awful day

 

I awake

To this

Misery

Again 

Again and again

Misery again and again

Never ending pain 

Never ever and ever ending pain

The never ever ending pain

Of this terrible , endless never ending pain

 

ian59

 


Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-08-11 16:33:08

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12/08/2015 at 18:53

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I do not dwell on the pain of my past ,

I want to live for today,

I fill my mind with joy and hope that will last ,

there's no room for bad thoughts , no way !!

I only focus on things that lift me higher ,

a family picture around a camp fire .

There is happiness to be had if you look in the right places ,

turn your nightmares into pretty dreams and flower beds in your minds darkest spaces.

Never let yourself be beaten , fight like a warrior would ,

Be brave , be bold , get up on your feet , and you can turn all that is Bad into Good .

 


Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-08-12 18:53:22
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