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Gilda

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Edited on 18/08/2016 at 20:01

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Hello everyone!

Taking into consideration Neil's advice we want to start a new conversation in which you can express yourself through writing. If you want it to be a short story, poem, tale, song, even a whole novel.... Anything that helps you channel all you need to say and that in normal words you can't.

So I leave you this space and feel free to use it as you wish and ask our writing expert @Bipolarbill for advice.

All the best,

Gilda

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xDarenx

12/08/2015 at 19:39

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I'll go

Over the rainbow

Flying

Without trying

Strumming

And humming

With joy

The hoi

Polloi,cats and teddies share there

Living on steak and milk and honey

All in love is fair there

No one needs money .

Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-08-12 19:39:19

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18/08/2015 at 19:48

I feel so alone, there is so much going on in my head, this emotional pain is slowly destroying me........no one can hear my silent screams!!!!

I just want to be invisible, to fade away, to just disappear..........or do I?

I cant keep this mask on for much longer but I don't dare to show anyone the real me..........or can I?

I cant trust anyone......or can I?

All I know is that is sure is messy in my head right now.

I want to cry but that would mean I am weak and pathetic....or would it?

Everything hurts so much

Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-08-18 19:48:45

xDarenx

19/08/2015 at 11:49

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The Sun is Out,
The Sky is Blue,
There's such a lot of things to do ,
When it's not Raining .... It better not bleedin' start !!!

Daren x

Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-08-19 11:49:15

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Edited on 25/08/2015 at 11:26

Paper poison (Moneys hold on our world)

When monsters are god's holding us in the sweet embrace

We choose to see the devil or the mask ,this cage of steel

Knots in the thread slipping through,transparent to few the light to many

Blackened Cities, children dead like beautiful roses strewn across the floor

The fountain of youth toxic with the debt of countries and lives

Chasing the world on crutches of the poor, the storm approaches...

Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-08-25 11:19:40

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Edited on 25/08/2015 at 11:26

Scarlet rain

Falling like so meny before

The bottom is so close

There's no ladder ,no rope

This hurts deeper then my eyes can see

Time is no savior, just game's to play

You say you love me as i watch you fall

Help me , help you

I'll bring you the sky

I'll bring you heaven

Just give me your hand

Help me understand ...

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Edited on 30/08/2015 at 00:36

Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-08-25 11:44:59

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26/08/2015 at 15:13

Everest

Tattered ribbons of rotted silk

Adorn

the strewn corpses

of lunatics

who

Come here

To die .

Why ?

' Because it's there '

Fools selling

The Double glazed mask

An empty summit

Fools climbing mountains

So that

They

Feel alive .

ian59

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Gilda

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01/09/2015 at 12:29

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Hello guys,

You can't begin to imagine how happy it makes me to see that you are using this discussion and I hope it is helping.

Keep the good work, I love all you've written.

All the best,

Gilda

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xDarenx

11/09/2015 at 01:23

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Said Aristotle unto Plato ,

" Want to come with me to AA Bro ? "

Said Plato unto Aristotle ,

" Thank you , I prefer the Bottle "

Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-09-11 01:23:52

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Edited on 11/09/2015 at 23:55

I spend each day inside a cage,

A cage that others do not see;

The bars are pain and suffering,

Will I ever be set free?

Each day I stare out through these bars,

And wonder where I’ll find the key;

I face the world and always smile,

The only one who knows is me.

If someone opened wide my cage,

This cage of pain I’ve lived so long;

I wonder, would I be relieved?

Would leaving it feel too wrong?

Each fresh pill brings hope anew,

Hope that this might be the one;

I gulp it down and wait to see,

Has this pill, the battle won?

Nothing’s changed, the pain’s still there,

The cage bars are still thick and strong;

Familiar pain, the friend of years,

Pain that’s been there oh so long.

I dream one day I’ll be pain free,

The cage, the bars will disappear;

I’ll live my life as others do,

No longer start each day in fear.

Suncatcher2015

Writing Workshop! https://www.carenity.co.uk/forum/other-discussions/fun-and-games/writing-workshop-420 2015-09-11 23:52:56

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